For a Walk to a Stream: Difference between revisions

Latest revision as of 05:30, 19 April 2008

For a walk to stream

Mourn-ing red lips, sorrow of ships, labour-ing heart, whole of world tears . . .

Burden of heart, in-jur to blood, grizzly bear licks, mouthful of stars. . .

A heart in mine, mine heart is you, rip out a voice, throw out a song . . .

Angeldar hide me, please to release me, in-jur is old, still burn, still cold.

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-Mourn-ing lips red, sorrow of ships, labour-ing
+Mourn-ing red lips, sorrow of ships, labour-ing heart, whole of world tears . . .
-heart, whole of world tears . . .
+Burden of heart, in-jur to blood, grizzly bear licks, mouthful of stars. . .
-Burden of heart, in-jur to blood, grizzly bear
-licks, mouthful of stars. . .
 A heart in mine, mine heart is you, rip out a voice, throw out a song . . .